i dig this kind of portal
you know why? it shows that your interested in flash, not just a quick stupid stick death, or some guy taking a shit just for a laugh. An attempt at a serious portal submition, is quite an ambitious thing to do at newgrounds. I commend you, for this entry has alot of good qualities, the drawing was ok, though to get thinner lines, go to window>panels>stroke, and theres a bunch of options there. dont just use red over black, the music was cool and had decent sound also. Other cool effects you can do is fogg effects, Window>panels>mixer, and the alpha bar at the bottom, move that up and down and draw with the paint brush, and youll notice the color is faded depending on how high the alpha bar is, well this reviews getting really long, if you want to talk to me bout some other stuff in flash, my aim is in my profile. otherwise keep up the good work.